wmii

commit 06f0ba0bd5d66969b38e5c2eedc2138f53c7dace
parent a25cb7a75fcec9e4fbf1ddbd409c607bbbfef51b
Author: stepardo <stepardo@localhost.localdomain>
Date:   Sat,  6 May 2006 21:43:23 +0100

Merged patch from Adrian.


Diffstat:
doc/guide_en.tex
 | 
18
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1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/guide_en.tex b/doc/guide_en.tex
@@ -82,10 +82,10 @@ people mentioned at \href{http://wmii.de/index.php/WMII/People}{WMII/people}.}
     Wmii--3 is a new kind of window manager. It is designed to have a
     small memory footprint, be extremely modularised and have as
     little code as possible, thus ensuring as few bugs as possible. In
-    fact, one of our official goal is to not to exceed $10 k$ lines of
-    code~\footnote{ benefits of the $10 k$ SLOC restriction are that
+    fact, one of our official goals is to not exceed $10 k$ lines of
+    code~\footnote{ benefit of the $10 k$ SLOC restriction is that
     it's easier to read/understand, thus it's easier to use and get
-    used to.}.
+    used to it}.
 
     Wmii tries to be very portable and to give the user as much
     freedom as possible.
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ people mentioned at \href{http://wmii.de/index.php/WMII/People}{WMII/people}.}
     Wmii--3 is the third major release of the second generation of the
     window manager improved~\footnote{ the ii is actually the roman
     numeral for 2.}.  Wmii first introduced a new paradigm in version
-    2.5, namely the dynamic window management, that overcomes the
+    2.5, namely dynamic window management, that overcomes the
     limitations imposed by the WIMP paradigm (see also the companion
     \emph{wmii.tex}).
   
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ people mentioned at \href{http://wmii.de/index.php/WMII/People}{WMII/people}.}
     I presume the reader already has experience with Unix, knows all
     the basic terminology and concepts like files and editors.
 
-    I hope you are open minded to new ideas, and willing to spend some
+    I hope you are open minded towards new ideas, and willing to spend some
     time learning \wmii--3~\footnote{remember the refrain: ``nobody
     can teach you what you don't want to know''.}.
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ people mentioned at \href{http://wmii.de/index.php/WMII/People}{WMII/people}.}
 
     Wmii is licensed under the MIT/X Consortium License, which
     basically means it is free software, and you are free to download
-    from \hrefx{http://wmii.de} free of charge~\footnote{ please have
+    it from \hrefx{http://wmii.de} free of charge~\footnote{ please have
       a look at \hrefx{http://wmii.de/repos/wmii/LICENSE}  for
       details}.
     
@@ -134,13 +134,13 @@ people mentioned at \href{http://wmii.de/index.php/WMII/People}{WMII/people}.}
     
     First of all, have a look if there are binary packages of wmii in
     your distribution. Debian, Ubuntu and Gentoo should already have
-    good packages. If you found a package to trust, you may now safely
+    good packages. If you found a trustworthy package, you may now safely
     skip this section.
 
     For all those who are still reading this, let me tell you that you are
     on the good side because if you grab the sources and compile them yourself
-    you'll benefit from having everything in it's original place, so
-    it'll ease your use of wmii.
+    you'll benefit from having everything in it's original place, which will
+    ease your use of wmii.
     
     \begin{enumerate}